Monday, April 4, 2011

#3

       Everybody wants to have good jobs, than to make a lot of money to have good living. But the most important thing is sometimes some people have woking problem. So, the point should teenagers go to work or only adult go to work. This is the problem people have to slove.    http://www.nytimes.com/2001/02/03/opinion/l-teenagers-at-work-741159.html?scp=3&sq=Problems%20%20for%20Teenagers%20Who%20Hold%20Jobs&st=cse This story talk about teenagers working on the part-time but sometimes teenagers even work on full-time. So, the most important thing is when teenagers working but they do not think about their own school grade and homework. so, parents should not let teenagers go to work, because they will only think about money but they will not think about their personal problem. http://fort-greene.thelocal.nytimes.com/2011/03/15/some-local-options-for-teen-summer-jobs/?scp=1&sq=teen%20work%20problem&st=cse In this story talk about teenagers working on the summer time, I think teenagers should not working on the summer time, because students have to study more because they have to attenend college and they have to become a good skill men, so, the most important thing teenagers should stary home studying the work.

1 comment:

  1. Nice essay ideas, but it's a little short. Good use of references to other articles.

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