I think people should not use RBGH to animal, because this
is unhealthy for animal, also this is unhealthy for human. So,
who work in this kind of job, they should stop doing it. Also,
I would like to say all of animal they mixed together, it shows
how animals live in farms, and they have bad conditions, also
they will not going to give health food to animal. Because they
want animals growth more fast, and they want make money, but
they do not even think about others people they just think their
self. So, when animals eat a lot of chemical, that when people
eat animal will effect to human body. Everything happens around
animals, also it shows in the real world of animal farmers. So,
the most important thing is people who work in farmers should
give chemical to animal, also people should give living
conditions to animal. So, before we use chemicals to animal we
should think others people who eat meats will getting sick.
i agree some of your views. stopping by human, no just by worker.
ReplyDeleteYou have the great reflection, but it would be better you write the summary about the Meatrix movies.
ReplyDeleteI agree with your opinion, we would get sick if we eat too much meats with RBGH.
i think that people should give health food to animal on farm, because people eat the meat can take the health.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you...i think people should care about buying food all time. you have to write more clear reflection. you should say in your opinion about meatrix.
ReplyDeleteyou should write summery and reflection in two paragraph separately and clearly your sentence. Are you eating animals?
ReplyDeleteit's not only unhealthy for animals, it's also bad for our health. and it will makes environment change bad .
ReplyDeleteyou need to write summery even you have nice reflection. you can write summery from Meatrix movie. i am agree with you, factory farms food is increasing disease.
ReplyDeleteyo man, you have to write more summery and reflection. Even it should be clear.Also, i agree with you when the people eat meat and it could affect their health.
ReplyDeletethe information you gave us are clearly expressed but it would've been better if you could have added more informations about the meatrix. you really didn't give opinion about that. lastly do you think that the the living conditions for animals were terrible?
ReplyDeleteI think people really need to stop using RBGH to animal. At least we need to used our ways to remonstrance those behavior.
ReplyDeleteyou have to write good summary.i did not understand clearly.their is no introduction and conclusion.
ReplyDeleteyour summery is OK but you need to write good summery.
ReplyDeleteI agree with what you wrote. The way the animals are treated and fed in fatories is very wrong. Your reflection was good but you should fix your summary of the movie. the way the words are lined up in sentences makes reading it difficult.
ReplyDeleteyou have a clear statement in you essay. but i
ReplyDeletethink you should have a summay in your essay. i also agree you point which people should chemical animal. there is not big problem on you word choice and grammar. I think if you origanize you structure , like write a complete summary then state you point and use you experience or something you learn in school to develop you point, it will be a nice essay.
you summary stands with good points of the topics.
ReplyDeleteI also agree with your claim and evidence.
Hi ShengYao,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your reflection on the Meatrix. You were very explicit and straight to the point. However, as many of the people who have given you a comment have said, I also think you need a short summary of the Meatrix. It also would be more helpful if you had put in parenthesis the meaning of RBGH.